Another part of my revision plans are including more pictures of the different rooms in the house. I added a picture of the entire house from the outside at the end of the twitterive. I feel that putting it at the end is the best spot after traveling through the entire inside of the house. I also added a picture of the stairway. I feel the picture of the stairway is important as well. I still have to add a picture and talk about the kitchen which has completely changed. I would like to see if anyone in my family has a picture from the kitchen 15 years ago.
After talking with two of my classmates I have decided that I need to adjust some things on my twitterive. I realized that I do not have enough genres within the twitterive. Realistically I only have three different genres. I have a short story, song lyrics, and a six word story. I do feel that the Six Word Story I added at the end is one of the best parts. It totally sums up how I feel about the house and the situation that might happen. I would like to add a wordle to my twitterive using some words from my tweets. I even thought about the idea of adding a shape poem but I'm not totally sold on that idea yet.
Another part of my revision plans are including more pictures of the different rooms in the house. I added a picture of the entire house from the outside at the end of the twitterive. I feel that putting it at the end is the best spot after traveling through the entire inside of the house. I also added a picture of the stairway. I feel the picture of the stairway is important as well. I still have to add a picture and talk about the kitchen which has completely changed. I would like to see if anyone in my family has a picture from the kitchen 15 years ago.
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